boom a chick a go, human, go

note: this is a bit different from what i normally write, but it came to me, so i met it half way. please, feedback and constructive criticism are appreciated.

boom chick
boom chick
tapa tapa tapa
crash
.
hit it
kick it
run and jump and twirl,
SCREAM!
.
two wooden mallets
grind against
the wall,
rat a rat a rat a tat tat tat ta…ta…ta…ta
ssssssssssssssssssss
.
and the smoke rises
.
kick a kick a kick a-
down it goes
[like] a torpedo in water
.
cause,
.
don’t need a damned
drumset [machine]
to make
the music
R O A R,
.
with simplicity
with beauty
with imagery
with FURY
with FEAR
with SUPERHUMAN STRENGTH,
.
rat tat a rat a tat sssssssssssssssssssszzz

a poem by tanya lareveur

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